One Eye is rather nice |
Last week I had a one day Landscape Workshop, now this week I had a one day Portrait Workshop. Intense! We had a live model for the Portrait class.
With my first value study, I struggled. I was not happy with the Canvas Paper -- the paint would not move around and the paper felt dry and it was hard to apply my paint. I think we had 30 minutes to complete this value study. I focused perhaps too hard on getting features placed on a new-to-me model. I also did not have a good view, too little of the right side of the face-that was a struggle.
Better Value Study |
The next pose for a value study was much kinder to me, an almost full face frontal. I loved the shadow side of the face, there was a strong shadow from the nose onto the cheek. I like the nose and mouth here too. A much more successful value study.
For the last pose of the day, we brought out the color! Finally! We used a Zorn limited palette which included Titanium White, Ivory Black, Yellow Ochre and Scarlet Lake. I was curious to try Scarlet Lake which was an Orange Red -somehow seemingly a bit brighter than Cadmium Red Medium.
A few nice areas, still imperfect. |
Unfortunately I had the bad corner again and I struggled with the short shadow side of the face--I do not know why this tests me so!Ugh! I was happy with the left eye that I painted and with the colors I was able to achieve with the limited palette. I was able to achieve the glow of her red hair, the light skin tone and the orangey mouth color. Again, the time constraints on these paintings were incredibly limiting. This painting is not done. I do not have enough paint down, I do not like the top of head shape, that shadow side really bugs me. I may work on this a little bit to correct a few things, maybe. While I dislike the overall painting, look at the eye closeup, I think it reads well and is accurate in shape, form and color. So one teeny segment looks nice!
This close up is lovely, if only this eye section was the painting! |
Nice job! You were really successful on the hardest part for me .... from the nose to the ear!! I think she is lovely, and I wonder if you just moved the bridge of the nose over to the right a smidge, would that fix it? :)
ReplyDeleteProbably, it was a struggle to get it all on the canvas so quickly! I haven't worked on it, not sure improvements will be made! Thanks for commenting!
DeleteYou are right, that eye is wonderful!!!! Very good proportions and directional position. Excellent color and values, excellent lighting and shadow for the form. Do twenty more of those, you will learn a lot!
ReplyDeleteThanks Maren!
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